Wednesday, September 28, 2005

Heaven, Take Me. Comments

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If I didn't have a chance
to make these feelings pass
then heaven wouldn't see
to the other side of me.
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Genevieve Surrender
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Erica Francis 28 September 2005

Truthfully, it can be either. Just know the topic involves 'love' :)

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Max Reif 28 September 2005

I like your supple lines. I'm not quite sure what you're saying, somehow-whether this poem is about love or the loss of love.

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

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