Monday, January 5, 2015

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THE CANDLE WENT OFF

Demolished benevolence clouted to resuscitate as abundance unbosom thine soulDemolished benevolence clouted to resuscitate as abundance unbosom thine soul,
Endurance mumbled in the hinterland to replevin thine lost loveEndurance mumbled in the hinterland to replevin thine lost love,
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Melisa Peter
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Chinedu Dike 06 January 2015

Love is whimsical and temperamental, it comes when it pleases and goes away without warning. Accept and enjoy it while it remains, but spend no time worrying about it's departure. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and penned with insight in poetic diction. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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