Hello/Goodbye. Poem by lilly mandrell

Hello/Goodbye.

Rating: 2.7


Hello love.
How are you?
Can we take a walk?

We can go to our favorite spot.
The place where the frogs
And little kids play.

Hello love.
How are you?
Why do you hurt me so?

You yell and screen and kick.
All those nasty word you say,
They pierce my heart.

Hello love.
How are you?
Are we at an end?

Our days start with
Broken lamps on the floor.
Our nights end in tears.

Good bye love.
I hope you die.
Will you choke on those words you said?

Forget your seatbelt,
And land head first in pavement.
Or go play on the freeway?

Good bye love.
I hope you die.
Will you where cement shoes in a pool?

Be pushed off a plain,
Swallow broken glass
Or burn you house down with you inside?

Goodbye love.
I hope you die.
Can you please make you heart stop beating?

Go stick needles in your eyes?
Overdose on to much drugs?
Or tie a noose and jump?

Love, I hate you.
Do us all a favor
And go die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prat Havan 28 April 2008

i liked the ending kinda made me laugh great one

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Jurietta Duraan 14 March 2008

quite severe.... good use of the repetative phrases... I like it

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