What You Did To Me. Poem by lilly mandrell

What You Did To Me.

Rating: 3.3


Images, thoughts, feelings of you run through my head
I cant forget what you said.
I want to scream out with frustration and anger
This feeling keeps getting stranger and stranger.

You were the reason I lived now your the reason of my self harm.
The things you said were so full of love and charm.

All I hear now is the sound of my crying myself to sleep.
I feel like Little Bo Peep when she lost her sheep
Confused, angry, mad
hurt alone but most of all sad.

Thursday, March 16, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,confused,frustration,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meredith Bullock 22 November 2006

awesome use of language to capture your thoughts.....love the use of Little Bo Peep- it really connects with the reader

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Anna Cellmer 20 March 2006

I think you captured your emotions very well and all flustration is here so widely expressed, I think it's really good emotional write so keep it up :)

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Ndidi Ubogu 19 March 2006

great, this is really a good effort. the poem is nice and i love the image u presented.

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