Perfect Poem by lilly mandrell

Perfect

Rating: 3.1


I can feel it in the air
I can smell your hair
As you whisper in my ear
Something only I can hear
I smile and laugh
As I think of the past
How I cried
Then I lied
You waited
And the feelings never faded
Then he came
But things sated the same
And time passed
Then finally you asked.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Monnar 21 August 2007

This poem has a nice flow.

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Christine Kimber 04 February 2007

i really liked this :)

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