Friday, March 7, 2014

Her Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ripples broke the moon into pieces
But her wishes elsewhere sniffed the air.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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V P Mahur 10 March 2014

Dear Sir, Deep feel of love are nice. 'What Life Is' Life is a test Whether work or rest And to at the top You must give your best ........................... .................... I invite you to read this poem and others and give your views. Thanks!

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Lorraine Colon 08 March 2014

The moon's reflection on the water was broken into pieces by a ripple. Beautiful imagery.

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