Sunday, October 2, 2016

Her Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Universe, Her Palace,
She holds it in her hands
Lightly like it is a thread.
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Shilpa Mallya
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Chinedu Dike 04 October 2016

Beautiful train of thought elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. An insightful poem well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Shilpa. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Rajnish Manga 02 October 2016

A deeply philosophical poem leaves the reader mesmerised about the profound role played thus far and still being played by love, man, woman, art and the nature in our lives. Thanks.

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Julie Smith 02 October 2016

Very beautiful and inspiring!

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The Dishevelled Writer 02 October 2016

I'm glad you like it

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The Dishevelled Writer 02 October 2016

thanks you :)

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Gbolabo Adetunji 02 October 2016

I wonder about the silent spectators. Very fascinating poem

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The Dishevelled Writer 02 October 2016

thank you so much :)

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