Her Universe Poem by Shilpa Mallya

Her Universe

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The Universe, Her Palace,
She holds it in her hands
Lightly like it is a thread.

Buoyant cloud, that universe,
Spiralling around her palm,
Churning the memories,
Of lives lived before her time.

Stars floating,
Galaxies watching
Silent spectators
Drafting her every move,
Judging her every moon.

Leave it and the universe will drift,
Unlike her who will be left there to wilt.

©ShilpaMallya

Sunday, October 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and dreams,love and life,passion,surrealism ,woman,womanhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 04 October 2016

Beautiful train of thought elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. An insightful poem well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Shilpa. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Rajnish Manga 02 October 2016

A deeply philosophical poem leaves the reader mesmerised about the profound role played thus far and still being played by love, man, woman, art and the nature in our lives. Thanks.

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Julie Smith 02 October 2016

Very beautiful and inspiring!

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The Dishevelled Writer 02 October 2016

thanks you :)

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The Dishevelled Writer 02 October 2016

I'm glad you like it

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Gbolabo Adetunji 02 October 2016

I wonder about the silent spectators. Very fascinating poem

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The Dishevelled Writer 02 October 2016

thank you so much :)

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