Here Is My Shoes Poem by Jeanette Telusma

Here Is My Shoes

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With sharp eyes
I noticed you walking bare feet.
Is it because you like it?
I can't help but bring to your attention
broken glass and nails that may hurt you.
I could simply say be careful,
however, I rather give you my shoes
just in case.
Take it, better it be me than you.
I can't bear the thought.
Here is my shoes, please take it.
They are now yours.

Monday, May 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: giving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2017

Wonderful imaginary. Beautifully crafted. Let it be quoted.. .. I can't help but bring to your attention broken glass and nails that may hurt you. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 August 2017

They are now yours! Giving. Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 12 August 2017

Thank you, Edward for your comment.

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