Saturday, April 25, 2015

Here We Go Again Comments

Rating: 4.3

Bit my lip.
Closed my eyes.
I let the pain.
Seep down inside.
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Jewel Edwards
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Godfrey Morris 25 May 2015

Awesome write. The rhythm and signifance on point

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Chinedu Dike 26 April 2015

It's a terrible ordeal that many families have to put-up with on regular basis. I went through this kind of experience until I left home, it was emotionally and psychologically draining. I like the articulation and penning of the story. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Wilson Mezalopez 26 April 2015

This was so awesome, thanks for this!

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Kelly Kurt 25 April 2015

I'm sorry for the chaos in your life, Jewel. Writing can be good therapy. Keep up the good work. Peace

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Jewel Edwards 26 April 2015

Thank You ^-^ Not everything I write is like this, but I tend to write things that I hope everyone can relate to on some level.

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