Friday, November 6, 2015

Hey Buddy (Ditshegofatso Sephomolo Malemela) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey buddy,
I know this should grow old
But I miss you still.
I look for you in every being I meet
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Kholofelo Malemela
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Wht an insprational poem and its emotional

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Kim Barney 06 November 2015

Wow! Very emotional tribute. Well done. A couple of small mistakes on the third line from the end: Im ssorry I still cry, should be I'm sorry I still cry,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

This should grow old but pain should be removed from mind. Wonderful sharing.10

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