Hey, Honey//////////////////////////////////////////Call Poem by trinity aana

Hey, Honey//////////////////////////////////////////Call

Rating: 5.0


Hey, Honey, call me whenever
i want to hear you out, any time of the year
whenever you feel like calling me, telling me,
today, tomorrow, exactly nintyeight and eleven
nothing anyone can do shall transform
you? ?
me for sure! !
our predictament is final, judges inkpen broken
we are condmned to live and die
a life of two halfdrops splashing........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 08 November 2008

an astonishing poem indeed........beautifully penned......10+

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John Tiong Chunghoo 07 June 2008

very nice trinity. the part about ink splashing

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Asma Bahrainwala 23 January 2007

' a life of two half drops splashing'...very striking image... Asma...

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