Sunday, February 21, 2010

Hey...Spring Again! Comments

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the veil of fog
gets thinner and thinner
the seasonal flowers
lose their color
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indira babbellapati
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Spring brings hope. Drama of desire unfolds. Koels sweet melody is it from mango flowers? Nice spring poem.

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Sandra Fowler 27 February 2010

Lovely spring imagery from halfway around the world. Here small daffodils are struggling to lift their fragile blooms above the snow. But sometimes there is great strength in fragility.10++ for you. Always, Sandra

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Leonard Dabydeen 24 February 2010

Beautiful! I really like the way you try to entice the seasonal change with the 'koel fills the ears with its cooing' and 'every vegetation begins to breathe/resurrecting life once again'. Rich imagery bringing spring to life. Enjoy the read. Thnx for sharing. Blessings. Leonard

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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