Hidden Beauty Poem by Tanequia t..

Hidden Beauty

Rating: 4.8


On the right day he held you close
Pouring out his love to you the most
The smile on your face shines like the sun
just warmth and comfort
Pain will be none
Chocolate candies and back rubs
will be all for you in a sweet smelling soapy tub
Nice romantic thoughts cruise across your mind
the chance to finally relax willl be all your time
Do you ever wonder why he does such things
Could it be your hair or your eyes that's so sparkling
the answer lys in the soul of a man
so hansome and pure fresh so clean
Happy days are here so open your heart
let love do it's job
Why not give it a start
But before you say yes to loving
and fall in love with that man
find out exactly what is he loving you for
Be not fooled because the wise has a plan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 31 August 2008

This is a good example of what A writer can do with a pen when they want to. Use it for the benefit of others. A very well constructed piece of writing with a lesson as a bonus. Like a cracker jack box. GW62

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*~Kera ~* 15 January 2008

Very...Good...Poem... Nequa

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