Highly Impressed Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Highly Impressed
We are meant to be one
Forever and separated by one
I shall stand by
To keep you happy with earnest try
You smell like rose
And I always suppose
And long for your presence]
With love’s essence
It was real desire
And not to put it on fire
I moved with caution
To build good relation
I was highly impressed
And immersed
All kind of negative thoughts
In deep shelf outright
I took care to come close
And posed
As perfect individual
And treated you not casually
Hasmukh Mehta welcome Megha Shukla, Manish Doshi Just now · Unlike · 1
xDate & Time: 4/22/2015 8: 17: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 42059205 - Highly Impressed Member: Birgitta Abimbola Heikka Comment: Nice poem. Just two suggestions. Line 2, did you mean separated by none instead of one. Last line, I think it would read better if you said and treated you not casual. 7 hours ago
Heart Craze Thank you so much Hasmukh Mehta...that's so touching..I'm impressed to by your poem.. Very great day to you 1 min · Unlike · 1 13 hours ago
xHeart Craze Thank you..that's so touching 5 mins · Unlike · 1 13 hours ago
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4/26/2024 2:16:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice poem. Just two suggestions. Line 2, did you mean separated by none instead of one. Last line, I think it would read better if you said and treated you not casual.