Thursday, April 16, 2015
Him Alone Comments
Rating: ★4.3
A young face with a smile
A face with eyes that sigh
His mother’s run away with another,
His father went looking for his mother
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3/12/2026 2:59:03 AM # 1.0.0
That is a wonderful piece of writing, Vivek. You drew your readers in with a great opening line, tugged at their heart strings and described details to bring the story vividly into their imagination. Why did I ask him his name? A brilliant line that evoked a personal attachment and pangs of guilt. I could picture an orphaned boy on the streets in India, hungry, dirty confused, alone and sad. Well done!