Sunday, July 2, 2006

His Bony Foot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Again she rose at dawn,
she always was the one
who had the fortitude
to rise and shine, at six
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Dee Daffodil 02 July 2006

Lovely poem about the contentment and routine of a long married couple. Companionship comes in many forms. Very sweet write! Hugs, Dee

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***** ********* 02 July 2006

This was so sweet it burned my eyes Herbert! lol You are a lucky man indeed. And a very talented one too. Smiling at those cold tootie pegs! Just the sort of thing any loving wife would do. Tai

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Gina Onyemaechi 02 July 2006

Herbs, I thought this was going to be a sad number, but I've actually found it sweet and tender and rather humorous in places ('double dose of henna', for instance) . For me, though, there is something of an 'undercurrent' of sadness in the piece. I think it's obvious why. An enjoyable read. Et toi, mon cher Herbs? Comment vas-tu? G.

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