His Spirit Lives Poem by Dennis Go

His Spirit Lives

Rating: 5.0


His spirit lives
Though how early
He departs.

Confusion, not anger
Encased his emotions
In captivity
But Death
Sets him free -

Devoid of
Worldly promises
Crossing the bridge
Of a tree
From Calvary.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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Dennis Go

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Manila, Philippines
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