Hit The Road... Ur Done Poem by who cares im in love and its not with u

Hit The Road... Ur Done

Rating: 5.0


why i bother with the hurt and pain
why i let u drive me insane
i could never figure out
why i let u fill me with doubt
hit the road... ur done
u played and had ur fun
u took my heart
u tore it apart
whats with u
dont u know we're though
hit the road...ur done
i was a fool to think u where the one
u think im full of suprises till this day
how bout this hit the road.. ur done... get outta my way
theres no need for me to cry
all u ever did was lie
u expect me to trust u
when so called love never true
glad u had ur players fun
good-bye hit the road... ur done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 12 June 2011

Such long time not read something from you and still i think it consistently nice writing and the emotion fit well for theme you choose..but yeah the point so deep..Future is waiting and you found your way i have nothing to say wish you only the best Ash and i know u are strong type person so I know u will get the best :) _Unwritten Soul

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J. Wright 01 February 2011

I love the rythem of this piece, flows nicely, I like it :)

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Kibrom Habtu 22 January 2011

such a poem i will not forget such a poem i will remember for a such a poem...10

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Peter Strugnell 11 January 2011

to the point, i like it

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