Saturday, September 1, 2007

Hold Back The Dawn Comments

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I wish all the time
that I could hold back the dawn,
so we could spend more hours together,
before once again from my arms
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 01 September 2007

sounds so wonderful David...I'm so happy for you to have what you have: O)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 September 2007

Oh I wish, to live in a Eternal moment just looking into the eye's of the one I love, never to have to part ever again...

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Indira Babbellapati 01 September 2007

the wish to hold back the dawn...simply great!

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x... x... 01 September 2007

This is so nice it's not only good but it's pretty, a lovely read...just keep the shades down and hang on tight...Or take a vacation day..Life's short and you have a wonderful love and you are enjoying every moment and sharing it with us. thanks David...~~~moi.xo~~~~~

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Theodora Onken 01 September 2007

Amazingly romantic write...and oh havn't we all felt that. I wrote a poem about the darn dawn coming...called it Aubade...Dedicated it to a friend on another site. Love your work David! Always, Theo

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David Harris

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