Hold Me Poem by Violet Creek

Hold Me

Rating: 2.7


Hold me,
when I cry.
Hold me,
when I yell.
Hold me,
when you just don't know.
Hold me,
when I need you.
Hold me,
when you see me.
Hold me,
when there are no words to say.
Hold me,
when I lie.
Hold me,
when I just can't tell you.
Hold me,
just to show me the way you feel.
Hold me,
when I want to die.
Hold me,
when when I cry.
Hold me,
and never let me go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Buried Alive 07 May 2011

i think the last line sums up the poem in its entireity

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