Holding My Hand Poem by Daniel Adams

Holding My Hand



Sitting on the pier looking out across the sand,
Arm around me and holding my hand.
I'll love you forever, I love you so.
I'll clutch on forever and never let go.

Your smile makes my heart do a leap.
Your love is one I want to keep.
You're not just my partner you're an amazing friend.
I want you with me 'til the very end.

I'm really sorry I'm not the best.
And the fact I'm not like the rest,
My words could cut so sharper than a knife
But I love you more than I love my own life.

Anything I say would be out of rage.
I hope we're at that stage,
Where we can argue and we can fight.
But later on it'll all be alright.

I'm sorry for being a prat.
For not saying what I feel and that.
My heart will beat for one sole reason.
Through spring and summer and every season.

For a person who's strong and true

And that person, my love, is you.

Thursday, September 20, 2007
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Rivera 24 October 2008

You're gift is abundant and leaves me awestruck. Words so deep- a passion so true, I can completely feel all that you were saying- I've met a few 'amazing' writers- I know a lot of writers but your poetry for some reason has me wanting to read more- and I never even heard of this site before my teacher sent me your link. Loved this poem, -Mark

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Linda Weischedel 09 November 2007

Very, very precious Daniel. Always, Linda

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Polar Bear 20 September 2007

I think it's very sweet :) .......

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