Daniel Adams

Rookie (15-11-1991 / Newcastle Upon Tyne - England.)

Holding My Hand - Poem by Daniel Adams

Sitting on the pier looking out across the sand,
Arm around me and holding my hand.
I'll love you forever, I love you so.
I'll clutch on forever and never let go.

Your smile makes my heart do a leap.
Your love is one I want to keep.
You're not just my partner you're an amazing friend.
I want you with me 'til the very end.

I'm really sorry I'm not the best.
And the fact I'm not like the rest,
My words could cut so sharper than a knife
But I love you more than I love my own life.

Anything I say would be out of rage.
I hope we're at that stage,
Where we can argue and we can fight.
But later on it'll all be alright.

I'm sorry for being a prat.
For not saying what I feel and that.
My heart will beat for one sole reason.
Through spring and summer and every season.

For a person who's strong and true

And that person, my love, is you.


Comments about Holding My Hand by Daniel Adams

  • (10/24/2008 7:15:00 PM)

    You're gift is abundant and leaves me awestruck.

    Words so deep- a passion so true, I can completely feel all that you were saying-

    I've met a few 'amazing' writers- I know a lot of writers but your poetry for some reason has me wanting to read more- and I never even heard of this site before my teacher sent me your link.

    Loved this poem,

    -Mark
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  • (11/9/2007 9:30:00 PM)

    Very, very precious Daniel.
    Always,
    Linda
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  • (9/20/2007 2:39:00 PM)

    I think it's very sweet :) ....... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 20, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 10, 2011


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