Holding My Hand Poem by Daniel Adams

Holding My Hand



Sitting on the pier looking out across the sand,
Arm around me and holding my hand.
I'll love you forever, I love you so.
I'll clutch on forever and never let go.

Your smile makes my heart do a leap.
Your love is one I want to keep.
You're not just my partner you're an amazing friend.
I want you with me 'til the very end.

I'm really sorry I'm not the best.
And the fact I'm not like the rest,
My words could cut so sharper than a knife
But I love you more than I love my own life.

Anything I say would be out of rage.
I hope we're at that stage,
Where we can argue and we can fight.
But later on it'll all be alright.

I'm sorry for being a prat.
For not saying what I feel and that.
My heart will beat for one sole reason.
Through spring and summer and every season.

For a person who's strong and true

And that person, my love, is you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Rivera 24 October 2008

You're gift is abundant and leaves me awestruck. Words so deep- a passion so true, I can completely feel all that you were saying- I've met a few 'amazing' writers- I know a lot of writers but your poetry for some reason has me wanting to read more- and I never even heard of this site before my teacher sent me your link. Loved this poem, -Mark

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Linda Weischedel 09 November 2007

Very, very precious Daniel. Always, Linda

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Polar Bear 20 September 2007

I think it's very sweet :) .......

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