Broken Angel

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Holding On - Poem by Broken Angel

Today,
i made a promise,
not to you,
but me.
~
It was hard,
but i had to do it.
~
I promised,
i wouldn't go anywhere,
i'll never leave you,
even in the darkest hours,
i'll be right there.
~
My promise,
was to keep holding on,
not for me,
but for you,
because i don't want you,
to do the same thing,
if i was too.
~
I asked you,
if you would,
you answered: I'm not sure.
~
I said,
please don't ever even think that,
but your leading me to believe,
if i do it,
you would too.
~
Maybe that shows,
how much you care,
but i can't let that happen,
and i wont.
~
So i'll be here,
i'm not going anywhere,
i'm holding on,
till the end of time.
: : end: :

**this is a promise to my best friend(christina) ...that i wouldnt commit suicide, though the only reason i finally promised that, was because she seemed to act like she would do the same if i did that deed and so being the person i am.I just couldn't let that happen.**

written: 12/15/05

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  • (1/15/2006 7:23:00 PM)


    When you become speechless
    That’s when I get the answer
    So I am going to hold on
    Not for me but for you
    For if you do that
    My ghost would never be at rest



    Wow, I so much like your poem because you made a very good promise, and I also want to thank your friend for being such a rare gift. I think the poem is written out of pride, because you are so much proud of having such a caring and understanding friend (and I jealous you for that) I want you guys to keep being good friends, also I want you to keep it up.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 15, 2006


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