Holding You Poem by Mahoghany M

Holding You

Rating: 5.0


Holding you could be
One of my favorite pastimes
If you let me
I could lose
My fears
My tears
My years
Imagine
The love
We could share
Let the moonlight shine
As our bodies are intertwined
Everything will be
Just fine
You can dine
While I whine
Then we can flip the script
I and you
We know what the meaning is:
Round Two

Holding you could be
One of my favorite pastimes
If you let me
Imagine all of the darkness
Brought to the light
Our bodies tell all of the secrets
We'd rather hide
Holding you could be
One of my favorite pastimes
If you let me

Holding You
Friday, January 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 26 January 2018

I think this poem has stylish structure and words that fly straight to the point like arrows- I am one who appreciates directness and brevity. 10

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Mahoghany M 29 January 2018

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Mahoghany M

Mahoghany M

Brooklyn, New York
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