Wednesday, October 1, 2008

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My eyes shower down
The remains of my soul
My heart's been devoured
I'm left on my own
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Ryan Joseph Holder
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Tyease Collins 13 October 2008

I love the last two lines of the poem. It completely sums up how you feel overall. I definately know how you feel when it comes to people thinking that they understand but have no idea at all. This is a really good poem i really like it Good Job -Tyease

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Jackie Renee 01 October 2008

very well written. 'i'm a capsule, a void, a vessel that's empty! '...brilliant.

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Ryan Joseph Holder

Ryan Joseph Holder

Miami, Florida
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