Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 423,847 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hollow Life - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Hollow life


Life is hollow
That shall not allow
And swallow
Entire life’s growth

With many loop holes
It is difficult to pull
You are certainly puzzled
And life is fully struggled

Plug the loop holes
Make nice call
Turn up side down
Face the mistakes and own

Make life like flute
And try to dilute
All difficulties
Into good qualities

You are like an artist
Make full twist
Change life int singing competition
Ane show it as living relation

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2015 6:49:00 PM)


    Kavari Yadav likes this. Comments Hasmukh Mehta Hasmukh Mehta welcome Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2015 6:49:00 PM)


    Manjiri Chowdary likes this. Comments Manjiri Chowdary Manjiri Chowdary I feel confused today. Don't know what I'm doing...See More Unlike · Reply · 1 · 11 mins
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2015 6:48:00 PM)


    Very niceChange life into..............Living relation. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 5 hrs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2015 10:06:00 AM)


    You are like an artist
    Make full twist
    Change life int singing competition
    Ane show it as living relation
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2015



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