Tuesday, May 8, 2018

Holy Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am not a religious woman,
but given half the chance,
I would call in sick every Sunday
to worship at the temple of your body.
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Aimee Kiefer
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2019

I have never been baptized, but in the warmth of my bedsheets the sweat that drips from you is far more sacred than any Holy Water. beautiful way of describing all that is in your mind. thank u. tony

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Chinedu Dike 10 May 2018

Absolutely romantic piece of poetry that resonates with literary conviction, elegantly brought forth with artistic brilliance. A beautiful rhetorical poem. Thanks for sharing Aimee.

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Neil Stewart Mcleod 09 May 2018

the sweat that drips from you is far more sacred than any Holy Water. Is a wonderful vivid concept. Making love is a Godly gift!

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Iniduo Iniduo 08 May 2018

A nice provocative, lusty poem.

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Aimee Kiefer

Aimee Kiefer

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