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You remind me of winter nights
Cold snow crunching under foot.
My breath fogging in the air.
The cold crisp smell of pine.

The feel of you all soft and downy.
Your nose tucked under and your breathing loud.
And then I rub you on the head
You purr and make me smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Oconnell 24 May 2010

THIS IS A LOVELY, COSY POEM ABOUT HOME. EVERY WORD DOES ITS WORK AND THE RHYTHM IS PERFECT. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT AND GIVE MY REGARDS TO MULLINGAR IF YOU EVER GET THAT FAR.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 May 2010

ingeniously written all through lovely passion,10++, thanks for sharing

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Matt Mooney 16 May 2010

The stuff that poetry is made of and you made it effortlessly.

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