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Reading your poem very carefully, trying to interpret what it's meaning is, having a somewhat difficult time at deciphering it. Although I was able to understand some very brilliant and thought-provoking ideas and concepts throughout it, your use at times of words did not quite fit and understanding was elusive. Maybe doing a rewrite and breaking down some of the lines into more astute and understandable meanings. The gist of what you are saying is evident, but bogged down by the usage of words at times. Perhaps if you read this poem out loud, you will be able to hear and condense it favorably. Look forward to reading it again after editing it! Thank you for sharing! You do have great potential in poetry! RoseAnn
Dear Roseann, I am thankful for your observation and for sure would act on your advice. No doubt poems are to be ambiguous by their very nature but if it creates confusion, it's not the same as ambiguity. May be you sense confusion in the expression and in re-reading from your point of view would try how best it can be eliminated. I thank you again for your careful observation and comments. Tarun
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2/28/2026 5:48:09 PM # 1.0.0
Write comment. Such a nice start, Tarun K. K. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks