Friday, April 28, 2017

Homeless Comments

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A helpless man is sitting on the side of the road.
He's ragged, beaten up, his chances at life look slim.
He hates himself for what he is.
He's a begger but people just look and offer no help to him.
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Chinedu Dike 04 November 2017

A well drafted and nicely composed poem. Thanks for sharing Qwerty.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2017

What would you do if you happened to be him? He wants some love He sings and strums the chords of his heart. liked all these lines in your poem....... simply getting into the mind of the poor and homeless and understanding them and posing the question if you had to suffer that, what would u do? very fine poem. thank u dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2017

East or west, home is the best. Thanks

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