Homeless Man Poem by elysabeth faslund

Homeless Man

Rating: 5.0


He threw a shadow
Royally tall
Against the insect-splattered
Wall,
Blocking out the
Sunlight...
Leaving no gray areas.

I walked away
Looking back once...
I found him small,
So small.
But then, there was something
In my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marci Made 20 June 2007

Your heart is bursting forth from your words here leading you, I think, to 'small tears' as it does the reader....Your writing is amazing......~~~marci.xl

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Theodora Onken 20 June 2007

...a tear perhaps? Brillant again, and again! Theo

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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