Hope Poem by Alistor Isolé

Hope



Question, ask, but hear no answer
Wander, hope, an iron gate
Try to pass, but only hinder
Ponder, think and contemplate
Trapped alone inside the castle
House of hell and hall of hate
Alone against the beast in battle
Soul detached in self debate
Weapon forged of spirit wonder
Rusty, worn in disrepair
Heart and soul, O torn asunder
Blade lie broken in despair

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 26 September 2006

This is a good poem Alistor, I like the ryming, excellent, and it was very pictorial to the mind. Nice flow, well thought out. Love Ernestine XXX

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