Hope Poem by Shelvakumari Thachayil

Hope

Rating: 5.0


What do I do,
When I'm still in love with you?
You walked away,
'Cause you didn't want to stay.
You broke my heart, you tore me apart.
Every day I wait for you,
Telling myself our love was true.
But when you don't show, more tears start to flow.
That's when I know
I have to let go.
..............still I waiting for you...

Hope
Saturday, April 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 13 April 2018

Hi Shelva, Very emotional poem. Rising from the heart of the poet and directly speaking to the readers, hearts. Fantastic. A 100. On to my poems list and the poet in to my favourite poets.

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Shelva. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2018

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Touching expression with nice friendship and hope. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.10

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Shelvakumari Thachayil 07 April 2018

For a wonderful friendship

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