Hope Against Life Poem by Prabir Gayen

Hope Against Life

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- - My hope against life - -

Time with its bountiful look hadst come at the doorsil Of my room,
It waited for long to change the face of my
decrees,
The way it wished to change my fate wast unknown to me and I wast doomed.
Life's frameless freedom and it's fictional
Foam of beatitude put me outdoors off my room.
I wast a forlorn soul eaten within by my own folly and careless wast my wayfaring.
Upon awakening I find myself mocked
and sealed within the dark chamber of my mind.
A flame weak and thin refulgent amid the breast of eyeless prudence and hope outflows
As a rivulet finds its rest in the undulating ocean.
Thou art my hope, the last anchor and buttress
against life's sordid foray.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 05 February 2019

As a rivulet finds its rest in the undulating ocean. Thou art my hope, the last anchor and buttress against life's sordid foray. Great lines!

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 June 2019

Life's frameless freedom and it's fictional Foam of beatitude put me outdoors off my room. in the chamber of my mind i wanted to hide myself. fine poem dear poet Prabir, . tony

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Prosanta Mondal 28 August 2020

As a rivulet finds its rest in the undulating ocean. Thou art my hope, the last anchor and buttress against life's sordid foray.

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Prosanta Mondal 07 June 2020

As a rivulet finds its rest in the undulating ocean. Thou art my hope, the last anchor and buttress against life's sordid foray....////

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Prosanta Mondal 07 June 2020

Foam of beatitude put me outdoors off my room. I wast a forlorn soul eaten within by my own folly and careless wast my wayfaring. Upon awakening I find myself mocked and sealed within the dark chamber of my mind..../////

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Prosanta Mondal 07 June 2020

The way it wished to change my fate wast unknown to me and I wast doomed. Life's frameless freedom and it's fictional Foam of beatitude put me outdoors off my room.///////

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Prosanta Mondal 07 June 2020

Time with its bountiful look hadst come at the doorsil Of my room, It waited for long to change the face of my decrees, .........//////////

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