Humming Mind Poem by Prabir Gayen

Humming Mind

Rating: 5.0


- Humming Mind -
(To my beloved wife)

From my doorsill thou turned thy smile,
With pain in heart hushed up thou went,
In my room I waited for thee the whole day,
Rain was falling on dry leaves and thrilled me.
In painful drowsiness I woke up and saw outside,
All had gone and the door was empty,
In lonesome emptiness I heard a bird on the windowsill,
Singing with effortless delight to call his sweetie.
With pain in heart I called thee and thou wert gone.
Yonder! A boat was sailing with its viators,
On the calm watercourse were swelling
calm waves.
In the bower beside my groove bees were humming madly,
From flower to flower they were staggering,
Fragrance deep was coming from broken casement.
Mad with the fume of perfume I chanted
thy name with wild excitement,
Thou wert gone and a flower bloomed in my heart,
A groove inside my being with humming mind,
I was mad with the flower that bloomed in the soil of no-soul.

Humming Mind
Wednesday, December 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

Deep fragrance is sprinkled in beautiful mind and a tender affectionate life poem is excellently penned. A beautiful picture of your wife is chosen as cover that matches to this poem. Effortless delightful singing we hear from this poem. An amazing sharing is done. This is a nice ode poem to your wife....10

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Prabir Gayen 05 December 2018

Thanks a lot for your deep and thoughtful comment..you are a good poet as well as a good critic..a wise man... Reverend Kumarmani Mahakul

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Prabir Gayen 06 December 2018

Thanks and love to all my poet friends who are showering love and blessings on me...dear poet poet..bharati di...kumarnani ji..mahtab ji..and to all

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 December 2018

SAD YOU NEVER THANK NOR REPLY FOLKS THEY WILL RUN O PRABIR JI POET YE YOU READ ME I WILL YOU ' THEN ONLY WILL WE BECOME POETS TWO... WITHIN PH 500 YOU X/500 I XX/500 JUST IMAGINE

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Prabir Gayen 06 December 2018

Thanks dear poet...thanks from the bottom of heart....and especially to you for your love and support.....

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Bharati Nayak 05 December 2018

In the bower beside my groove bees were humming madly, From flower to flower they were staggering, Fragrance deep was coming from broken casement. Mad with the fume of perfume I chanted thy name with wild excitement, - - - Lovely poetic expression of deep love for your wife.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2018

u wife must be so happy with thy poem thou art a lover by thine poems is divine unlike many of mine

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 December 2018

beautiful word composed you are for life partner

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