Hopeful Wanderer Comments

some fine succinct images, like the poem very much

I think this is my favourite of yours thus far. Makes my spirit glow. the sun warming a fire inside Of me, telling me that ‘darling, you are My moon-child, my little daisy love so full Of goodness and light. Keep shining for me perfection.

evidently deeply felt and emotive ideas and experiences have flown out in poetic fluency. may appear general and out of focus, but to me they appear nicely written neat lines liked