Saturday, April 8, 2006

Hopeless Upon My Bed Comments

Rating: 5.0

the clock still blinks
from a recent power outage
it's eerie green blue light casting
shadows of the wrong time
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Nick Percowycz 09 April 2006

This poem is a Stradivarius. It is crafted by a true Miestro. It is put together meticulously with precision, making sure that it all turns into a masterpiece. The first verse could be a poem on it's own. Very weel done, Eila! A 10.

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