Thursday, September 15, 2011

Horizon Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the sea the sea is me and up above the sea the sky -
the sky is I -
and in between the line unseen.
The sailor's stitch, the traveller's twitch,
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Jack Oates
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Romeo Della Valle 16 September 2011

Amazing! Jack! A wonderful, well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more of such thought provoking writes! If time permits, please, read my poem titled like yours: A NEW HORIZON, hoping that you will enjoy it as much as I honestly enjoyed yours! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Elizabeth Thomson 16 September 2011

Wow this is so beautiful! i love how you personified the horizon and everything it could be. because in life we all reach for the horizon, but it always will be unreachable ahead of us because when one is conquered another found! :)

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