Hot Summer Poem by Sahara Parvin

Hot Summer

Rating: 5.0


We are tired of climbing the hills,
We are tired of carrying the guns,
We are tired of crying of the birds
We all are tired of hot sun of may.

But we are at peace at hearts
Beacaus we do not forget our jobs
We are ready to fire and shot
To anyone by the name of man or woman.

Are you laughing at us?
For what? What is our motif?
Know, we have none, we are Terrorists,
Look behind, coming with guns, the Patriots.

Thursday, May 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: terrorism,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 26 May 2017

a poem with a belief in what they do is right for them and their country? .............well written.

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Bimal Hati 26 May 2017

Thank you so much... a poet like you! ! It gives me immense pleasure really.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 May 2017

A poetic burning with burning of life. Thanks

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Bimal Hati 26 May 2017

Jazib, your evaluation has increases the effect of the poem..... Thank you so much.

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Gajanan Mishra 25 May 2017

we are none, it is right.

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Bimal Hati 25 May 2017

Thanks.... It is you who first comment in my poem.... I am glad.

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Sahara Parvin

Sahara Parvin

Kolkata
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