Forty words:
Lovers no longer in harmony.
Disagreements put out the fire.
Understanding had flown far faraway,
Repressing their youthful desire.
Sadly, romance was over...
Absence of love darkened their eyes.
The hour of hopelessness threatened
And goodbye came as no surprise.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great expressions are often revealed in simple words. Your poem definitely does that Joyce. Disagreements and differences....the price paid at the end of the day is high...