How Are You? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

How Are You?

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'How are you and where are you? '
Would you mind if I so ask you?
Urge ran high so I asked you,
Do you think it right if I so ask you?

You were so nice and dear,
You are far away as I hear,
Pain is so high but I bear,
Find no means to stay just near,

Did I so offend?
lived so simple and ways also mend,
flowers and roses found its way,
I still found no other say,

You declined for a photo,
Even I had no such motto,
Still asked for a flicker,
But alas! you proved tinker,

Had it not been the business?
and love a commodity,
Had I not a been gentle man?
and you be a businesswoman

It would have been a reality,
A mere necessaisity and not the quality,
Be that not even turn farce,
Be that not rude but always be nice

Found in you always a treasure,
Enjoyment more but never a measure,
safety and securiy always I assure,
But you buckled under so pressure,

Was it a right path? I don't know,
In a prayer always I bow,
Still a mystery and no reason how,
It can be any but not sacrad cow,

You may stay calm and cool,
All will be fine and I only fool,
continue to stare but find no glare,
blaze from within but take no care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poonam Suthar 25 August 2009

vYou were so nice and dear, You are far away as I hear, .....10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 16 August 2009

good affectionshown on line....10

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Shilpa Maheswari 16 August 2009

fien gesture online....10

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Lalvani Rekha 15 August 2009

well behaved manner on line....10

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Pami Panchal 14 August 2009

veery kind way of askig....10

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Dwi Utami 05 August 2010

How are and where are you? __I'm fine and i'm here, .. Would you mind if i so ask you? __Oh no problem you ask that. Urge ran high so i asked you__okkkkk: thumb: Do you think it right if i so ask you? __of course i'think this is right....right..hmmm., tanks for ask.+10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 December 2009

‘…But alas! you proved tinker, …’ ‘…continue to stare but find no glare, // blaze from within but take no care…’ Tinker = Gypsy do you mean that…mismatch for love… And finally Poet realized ‘…but take no care’. I suppose she [or he] is a ‘No’ person… Excellent poem Tenner Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to new posts: 'Size Zero ~ Ground Zero' and 'Past'….comments if you please… niv

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Lola Habas 22 November 2009

Had it not been the business? and love a commodity, Had I not a been gentle man? and you be a businesswoman 10

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Saroj Davde 25 August 2009

You were so nice and dear, You are far away as I hear, .....10

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Reshma Punjabi 25 August 2009

'How are you and where are you? ' Would you mind if I so ask you? ....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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