How Best I Love You Poem by ritty patnaik

How Best I Love You

Rating: 5.0


how best i love you
i dont have to say.time has softened the colour,
experience of love is muted by age.
past seems cloudy,
faces get blurred from view,
refusing to fade are images of you.
the sun, the rainbow andsky still there
your love has filled my mind and heart,
snugly in my heart you have stayed.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 21 June 2009

a soft..but heartfelt poem.... slowly gets its rhythm unto the reader... thank you.

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Marieta Maglas 16 June 2009

Conceptual metaphors: ''experience of love is muted by age'' and cognitive, visual metaphors: ''time has softened the colour'' in a wonderful poem of love..10++

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