How can a world so beautiful
Feel so meaningless?
How can a day that looks
As a perfect spring day should
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Your poem comes from a negative mind. When the mind feels positive everything seems bright and beautiful. I will give you a top mark to cheer you up.
Where is my Life and Mind now That after so much Experience and Memory Feels so lost? ................................................................. Tragic beauty exposed literally. Good and carries also radioactive frustration also.