It is an old man, ancient, with stiff, white hair
and yellow fingernails, sitting on a sagging bed
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I like the manner in which the narrative has been drawn out: slowed down even. The opening is great where the old man become as inanimates as the sagging bed. A brooding piece but one that packs a punch.
Rustic, well-crafted, and riveting piece - very nicely done