How Old Are You Ladys? Poem by Kaylee Questionable

How Old Are You Ladys?



Considering that
I'm 'Over You'
I find myself
thinking of you
a good
fifty percent
of the time
fifty percent
of the time
their hateful
thoughts
50%
Their loving
nice thoughts
fifty percent
I stll want you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I agree with Matthew!

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Matthew Wood 11 November 2008

Small critique, don't use 50%, use the word. I like it though.

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