Hughes.Nina.Haku.-A Realization During A Seemingly-Mindless Pasttime Poem by Amanda Saveley

Hughes.Nina.Haku.-A Realization During A Seemingly-Mindless Pasttime

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A good man you were,
Devoted father,
Loyal friend,
Brought down by a bitter blow
That was not yours to bear
You died a death not your own
For reasons you did not understand
By a face stolen to cause you pause
So unjustifiably you passed
Leaving business unfinished in your wake

A sweet girl you were,
Affectionate daughter,
Loyal friend,
Brought down by a bitter blow
That was not yours to bear
You died a death not your own
For reasons you did not understand
By a man you trusted with your life
So unjustifiably you passed
Leaving a life incomplete in your wake

A dear boy you were,
Compassionate warrior,
Loyal friend,
Brought down by a bitter blow
That was not yours to bear
You died a death not your own
For reasons you did not understand
By a skilled opponent whose hand was unwilling
So unjustifiably you passed
Leaving a dream unrealized in your wake

And I witnessed your deaths,
Shedding tears of regret like gently fallen rain
Yes, I wept deeply for your passing
Though you are but mere characters on a screen,
Lines spread across a page,
I shed tears for your deaths so sudden, too soon

Because I can spare none for my own.

Thursday, April 12, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Surrealistic verse, dripping with deep abstract tone...though similar in style...you encapture the theatrics of them in equal portion...Smooth construction...mellifluous ...Solid Craftsmansip, Amanda... ~ F.j.R. ~

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