Human Psychology Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Human Psychology

Rating: 5.0


Human being may never be afraid
Unless the danger is laid on path
He may certainly be frightened
Fear is developed and life is threatened

It is most dangerous sign
Man may not easily resign
He may try to put brave face
In face he has given up the chase

Individual may love life dearly
He may venture rarely
If that has some hidden danger
He may choose the course safe

He may think twice
Before committing with promise
The fear may stop him from doing so
He shall allow it to go

It is human psychology
That makes him to shiver with pity
He may ask for peace
And prefer the life to pass at ease

The fear may take his health away
He shall try for easy way
The daring attitude has disappeared
The next moment is very much feared

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

Human being may never be afraid Unless the danger is laid on path

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Gajanan Mishra 14 March 2014

love life dearly, I like it sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

not sure Kenneth White4 minutes ago Perhaps if you strengthen the meter and imagery

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

Needs Work Sen Barrymore1 minute ago I'm sorry I don't really like this one, it didn't really catch my eye. I couldn't feel the passion in it really. And it needs work you put absolutely no punctuation whatsoever in your poetry. You need to focus more on your emotions from your heart & write them down right when inspiration hits you or type them up on a notecard.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

Like 32 minutes ago by Mr. Frivolous to Human psychology

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

outstanding Swapnil (Sagar) Choure2 minutes ago nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

a lot of people are like that Tina Ross2 minutes ago writing is good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2014

I thought it was pretty good. haley york2 minutes ago Considering I've taken the college class psychology, I thought it was pretty accurate and I m just wring this so I can publish my poems: b

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