Saturday, May 23, 2015

Humming Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Southern wind blew strongly
As you were angry with me
I was sitting in our out house
Watching leaves fling through the air.
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Valsa George 02 May 2017

Beautiful poem on the descending dusk with a lovely image of humming birds! A full 10

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Sanjukta Nag 20 August 2015

beautiful imagery and the simile of humming birds.

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Hazel Durham 25 May 2015

Stunning write that flows with such ease, and a beautiful ending!

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