hunger you see it all the time
in a childs hallow eyes or in a elders wrinkled skin
hunger most people move to fast to notice
but if you took the time and stoped you will notice that its all around
I agree with Robert. It's a great message. Sometimes the mechanics of a poem doesn't matter. If it's from the heart (Or a good message) it's a good poem. Besides keep trying. You'll get better eventually. We all start somewhere.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good idea! it is good to see some idea that rarely people talk about here..keep writing_Unwritten Soul