Aniruddha Pathak

Gold Star - 132,546 Points (25.05.1941 / Godhra - Gujarat)

Hunger, Life's Prime Rhyme - Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

‘It's all about a bit of bite
‘To eat and fill my hungry maw,
‘To that end these skies I soar
‘Over every inch of land to pour,
‘And more than happy
‘I sure hope to be
‘With just some frugal breakfast—
‘Forget a sumptuous repast',
Seems to say this keen-looking kite
I saw.

‘Yea, were it not for hunger,
I'd bother to work no longer',
Preparing to fly away
Said this kite looking more grey.
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Reflections | 08.02.2020 |
Topic: bird, kite, hunger, life

Topic(s) of this poem: bird, hunger, kite, life

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It seems hunger is the prime rhyme of life.

Comments about Hunger, Life's Prime Rhyme by Aniruddha Pathak

  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (2/14/2020 3:20:00 AM)

    rumbling tummy
    is always hungry adds to more
    GREED
    you to all in hunger
    lovely poetry
    FEED
    Do more seed
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    Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak(2/15/2020 11:31:00 PM)

    ...And good feedback fills up my hungry maw,
    whist opening up further my greedy jaw.
    Thanks PP.

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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (2/13/2020 11:41:00 PM)

    Nature provides hunger and as the great motivators. (Report)Reply

    Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak(2/14/2020 12:20:00 AM)

    Keen observation here, thanks dear RMS

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (2/13/2020 11:29:00 PM)

    Hungry face
    on grey sky though prey
    but to death!
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    Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak(2/14/2020 12:18:00 AM)

    Yes, for the prey a grey death, well said. Thanks indeed.

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (2/13/2020 11:29:00 PM)

    For hunger - Life and time, great write (Report)Reply

    Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak(2/14/2020 12:17:00 AM)

    Thanks dear poet GM for such uplifting comments.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 13, 2020



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